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Paige really what to go see all the plants so she went to place where you can get a space ship it cost for $100. First she had to take lesson to learn how to fly a space ship. She took off and went to stars and plants. Once Paige got up there she went to the moon first. There was noting there all was it look like cheese. She did not what to go the sun so she did get burned. So she went to mars.

There was noting on Mars that Paige liked so she left and went to Jupiter she ask how is house here. The house cost noting they are free if you work here. Paige asks for a nice house. She was going to see a house to get, Paige really liked. There was stuff in it all u had was get food, it was great. Paige had 3 days to get a job. All of the people Paige lives near are great.

Paige went to bed, when Paige got up she went looking for a job. She went a movie theater. Asked if she can have job, they did not have to interview her or any she got the job right on the spot. They gave her the uniform and every thing. Paige worked behind the counter. She was paid 7.50 an hour, it was a lot but it was good to start with.

Paige worked for 5 hours a day. Then she went house and eat food that she got for the store. Once Paige got used being behind the counter so now she get to hand out the movie ticket. She is now being paid $8.00 an hour, She really miss her family so she think about leaving but not sure yet. So Paige said okay I really to leave. So Paige went to into the space ships.

Heading home felt so good after my year on Jupiter. I made myself comfortable for the journey, adjusting the pressure and temperature gauges in my sleeping compartment. It was amazing to think that I would be so much older when I woke up. Would anyone believe my story?
©2007-2010 ~jessegirl
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:iconmisora-hunter:
Well, the body techincally wouldn't age...
Sleep journeys are nice like that.
*shrug* If I was sitting in some cafe and somebody who had taken the seat across from me told me this, sure, I'd believe it.

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Not all runaways are wrong.
:iconredmarks:
There are a host of easily fixable grammatical mistakes. Did you reread this before posting?

If you didn't you really should as re-reading your on materials allows for you to see at what portions you are making the most mistakes. So in the end you become a better writer.
:iconjessegirl:
yeah i know there are but i am not a good spell i will try hard next time thank u for tell me that
:iconjessegirl:
i do not understand what u are trying to say to me is there any way that u can tell what u are trying to say thank u very much
:iconredmarks:
lol No problem. Might have came off as a little harsh in my first comment. If I did sorry.
:iconmisora-hunter:
Travelling through space, such as the distance mentioned in your story, is usually done by putting the traveller to sleep.
Since you didn't specify, I assumed.

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Not all runaways are wrong.
:iconjessegirl:
np tell if u need know what that means
:iconmisora-hunter:
Then you might want to explain it better in the actual story...
Because now I'm confused.
@.@

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